Poetry Reflection

POEM EDIT
I thought that taking out words out of my poem was easy. It wasn't that hard to make the changes in my poem to make it fit. Having said that, I think that my poems could be better. There's definitely room for improvement. I know I can write better poetry. But for the poem itself, it changed the way it impacts. I think the poem hits harder than my first poem. I definitly see the difference words can make in a poem.

GROUP WORK
When I got into a group with Chris and Danica, our poems were coincidentally identical. It wasn't that hard to put it together. The hardest part was probably figuring out how to use the all of our poems together. The good thing, we didn't have to really change our sentences. It was more of changing the words to fit into a guys character. It turned out to be a really good poem. All 3 of ours was equally in it.